http://jarodpretends.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jarodpretends.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fandomtownies2006-02-28 08:28 pm
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The Fourth Sin, Tuesday--OPEN

Jarod was sitting at the desk, watching Dr. Phil on the portable television. He was more confused about relationships than ever.

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
"Maybe. But compared to what she had before, I suppose it was impressive." It actually sounded like the girl was taken to some futuristic world, with washers and dryers and microwaves, if you thought about it.

The next part was the part she'd meant to practice, but now she just had to tell it. Keeping her voice even, she said, "When she wanted to go to sleep that night, the girl rang the silver bell, and was immediately transported to a beautiful bedroom, hung with gold and silver and white sheets. When she finally put out all the lights, and got into bed, a man crawled into bed with her, under the darkness."

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
Parker started laughing again, jolted out of whatever embarassment she'd been fighting. "Dork. They were married. Common-law married, anyway. That's just understood in fairy tales, even if there's no ceremony. And I seriously doubt there was any kind of slavery involved, since she fell in love with her husband. Even though she never got to see him."

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 02:10 am (UTC)(link)
"I suppose... a voice in the dark? Kindness? Comfort..." Parker cleared her throat, not sure what her tone there had given away, but afraid it had sounded a little too wistful. "So. This went on for several months, with our heroine alone with the bear during the day, and her husband in the dark of night. But she grew more and more lonely, and finally asked the bear if she coud visit her family."

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
Parker grinned, not sure if he was being deliberately obtuse, but said, "The bear was there in the day. And that would be when she'd visit, so, whatever." She yawned a little, and said, "The bear was okay with it, but said, 'you must promise not to talk to your mother alone, if you visit them; for you will bring terrible luck on us both if you do.'"

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
"Not just curiosity. She shouldn't have promised, if she couldn't keep the promise." Parker paused. "But yes, she went, she visited, and her mother talked to her alone, and convinced her to light an oil lamp one night, to see her husband. 'Maybe you are married to a troll, or a monster!'" Parker sighed. "I don't think that's why she did it, though."

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
"I'm sure that's why the bride's mother talked her into it. But I think the bride--" Parker's voice trailed off as she thought, then grew stronger. "I think she couldn't bear not knowing who he was. I think she loved him before she saw him, and not knowing this last thing must have been eating at her, making her doubt that he loved her. Otherwise, why would he hide in the dark? What did he do, in the daylight?" Her voice softened. "Love can be possessive, when it has limits set on its expression."

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
"Perfect... I don't know. Would she even want that? Or would she have to live up to it?" Parker laughed very softly. "Oh, you spoiled the big surprise. Story's over. Good night!"

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
"Maybe that's why it's better they met in the dark. So she could love him, and not care about the beastly part. Who was still her friend-- after all she was never afraid of him."

That voice, God, that was a voice for talking her into bad, bad things, and Parker felt a slow blush of heat work its way up her neck and across her face. "Sure you will," she said as tartly as she could. He could probably hear her breathing slow and stutter. God. "And so, she took the oil lamp, and lit it after he fell asleep, and..." She smiled, drawing it out again.

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
"He was beautiful." She was thinking of that morning after the snow storm, waking up to find him still there, asleep. "Not perfect, but -- warm, and human, and--" eyelashes and muscles and lips, and the sight of him, sprawled out "--touchable..." Parker swallowed, then gave up, and just pulled the covers over her head. Even if no one was there to see her. "And she just looked at him until she couldn't resist any more; she had to kiss him."

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
"She would have." Parker let out a slow breath as she got her pulse rate under control. "But as she bent down to touch her lips to his, three drops of oil splashed from the lamp, burning his chest and awakening him. 'What have you done? Now we are doomed, and I must leave you!'"

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Parker snickered, and yawned again. "Mmm. Probably not, because, because-- he was under an enchantment. 'If you had only waited a year,' he said, 'I would be free. Now I must marry the troll princess, who lives in a castle east of the sun and west of the moon.' And he would be gone in the morning." Parker shivered, and pulled the bedding closer at the idea.

[identity profile] mparkerceo.livejournal.com 2006-03-02 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
"Somewhere impossible to find. And when she woke up, not just her husband was gone, but the castle and everything in it." Parker closed her eyes, getting more sleepy. "The next part I could tell you exactly as it happened, but it's repetitive. After crying her heart out, she went off to find him. Of course. And she me three old women who told her that she'd find her husband either too late or never, in the castle east of the sun and west of the moon, but they each gave her a golden gift to help her on her way, since she should have been the prince's true bride." She yawned, then murmured, "True love."

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